When I saw
Isabel Allende’s talk, “Tales of passion”, you can see how woman fight, maybe
you can’t see it around you, or in your country, but is happening, woman are
against of discrimination and they have to tolerate the abuse in some parts of
the world, they have to keep their mouth shouted, or wait them with the launch
made, or even endure their abuses. Like Isabel says, woman have to fight back,
to be brave, and to be passionate, to move forwards and left behind the
discrimination against the sexism and drop the responsibilities that men have putted
in their shoulders and have the freedom to choose how to make his life without
social obstacles, they just have to realize what position they have in this
society an which one they really want to have. Is not easy to face and beat the
reality but it will be impossible if you don’t try.
In Chile,
this issue isn’t solved yet, we have not even progressed to fix this gender
inequality, and there are women who are tired of the disrepute that have, they
win less than men in jobs, they can’t play some sports, they are seen as sexual
objects or the weaker sex, and many others problems, and prejudices that
affects their daily life in their lifetime. I think that the only way to finish
with this war of sex is time, I mean, educate our children and to future
generations, so that both sexes can live without prejudice or complications, i wich i cuould stay alive to watch that happen.
Hi shipleta c: I have the same desire for our society than you, but I hope that the time used to change the mentality of the people be less than you imagine
ResponderBorrarIm pretty sure in a future we can change the reality, just like Isabel allende says, make a new world, not a better world.
ResponderBorrarIn Chile, we have the power to makes changes :3
Joaquín,
ResponderBorrarWC: 264. Not enough, I am afraid. You were requested to write 300.
Very good try with your writing indeed, you should edit your text in a much better way, though.
Please, pay attention to the following:
…(you can) I COULD see how womE(a)n fight,
… but IT is happening, womE(a)n are against (of) discrimination and they have to tolerate (the) abuse
… they have to keep their mouthS shUT(outed), or wait FOR them with (the launch made) THE LUNCH READY…
……Like Isabel says, womE(a)n have
… to move forward(s ) and (left) LEAVE behind (the discrimination against the sexism) DISCRIMINATION/SEXISM and drop the responsibilities that men have put(ted) ON (in) their shoulders and have the freedom to choose how to (make his life) LIVE THEIR LIVES without ANY social obstacles
IT Is not easy to face and beat the reality but it will be impossible if you don’t try.
…, they (win) EARN less than men in jobs,
…and many other(s ) problems, and prejudices that affect(s ) their daily life in their lifetime.??
…educate our children and (to) future generations,
……, (i wich i cuould) WHAT??? stay alive to (watch) SEE that happen.
Cheers,
JC